Well written. Beautiful and powerful in its simplicity. The funny thing is, there's absolutely nothing remotely funny about dying and when it's our time. Well, may I retract that? Death is in fact brimming with dark humor, what am I thinking?
The way you paced it, quick, without getting bogged down in platitudes guaranteed its fresh read. I mean, death, calls for a library full of platitudes. Thanks for avoiding that trap.
One response said something about your death 'series'. What's that? Would like to read more.
Your story touched me emotionally. Too early in the morning for that ha! Having been through several near death experiences I am quick to respond to this kind of story.
All in three minutes.
Bravo.
Tom